The other day we had some chocolate we listen to Mrs Mcguinniety opening the wrapper and snapping it we had to smell it taste it decbie it.
Use lots of WOW words to describe your experience while eating the chocolate. Use your 5 senses. - See, Hear, Feel, Taste, Smell
Attempt 1
Before I tasted the chocolate I was already excited.When Mrs Mcguinniety started to open the purple, white and brown rapper I was getting more excited.I was thinking “yum yum yum chocolate” i started to to drawled some more. I was getting super excited.
When she started ripping the rapper some more. I heard the rustling of the colorful wrapper. I was already dribbling like a dog and I didn't even have it in my mouth or near me. When she started to snap the big block of chocolate i heard the big CRACK! That was the chocolate.
I saw the big block of chocolate that was not close to a block anymore.I saw Mrs Mcguinniety handing out the little pieces of chocolate. I had the biggest smile on my face she got to me and told us that we had to look at it smell it and DO NOT EAT IT!.I saw the word cadbury carved into the chocolate.And yummy goodness.
I smelt the chocolate it smells yummy like powdery chocolate milk I was looking forward to sticking it in my mouth.It allsowy smelt the yummy choclate cream i think.It allsowy smelt like coco poweder. I was nearly fainting looking at the yummy chocolate.
I stuck it my mouth i left it in there for a few minutes. It was starting to stick to the roof of my mouth. It was sticking to my soliver. Yum yum yum i love chocolate.THE END
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Attempt 2
Before I tasted the chocolate I was already excited.When Mrs Mcguinniety started to open the purple, white and brown wrapper I was getting more excited.I was thinking “yum yum yum chocolate” i started to draw some more. I was getting super excited.
When she started ripping the rapper some more. I heard the rustling of the colorful pretty rapper. I was already dribbling like a dog and I didn't even have it in my mouth or near me. When she started to snap the big block of chocolate i heard the big CRACK !gave me a fright. That was the chocolate.
I saw the big block of chocolate that was not close to a block anymore i saw all the little tiny pieces.I saw Mrs Mcguinniety handing out the little tiny pieces of chocolate. I had the biggest smile on my face she got to me and told us that we had to look at it smell it and DO NOT EAT IT!.I saw the word cadbury carved into the chocolate.And yummy goodness i saw it was melting in my hand.
I smelt the chocolate it smells yummy like powdery chocolate milk I was looking forward to sticking it in my mouth.It also smelt the yummy choclate cream I think.It allso smelt like coco poweder. I was nearly fainting looking at the yummy chocolate.
I stuck it my mouth I left it in there for a few minutes. It was starting to stick to the roof of my mouth. It was sticking to my saliva. Yum yum yum I love chocolate heaps chocolate is dark brown like dirt.THE END but i'm hungry now.
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