Pages

Tuesday 29 November 2016

Send A Cow Persuasive Video

This week in literacy we have been learning about  send a cow our  literacy group did reading activities about send a cow. And  everyone did a persuasive videos to persuade people to donate money to send a cow  i was in a group of three with Summer and Natalia. 


And here is our video  

3 comments:

  1. Wow Jasmine that was a really good video! I remember when I was learning about send a cow. Maybe next time you could put a photo of Uganda!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hello girls, my name is Anisia and I go to St. Bernadette's Primary School. I loved how you all show your appreciation to other countries in need. Because of this video people will definitely be donating to this special cause. Next time could you try not to zoom in too much to the people.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Hi Jasmine my name is Kaedun and I go to St.Bernadette's School, that was a great video! The message said to me, that you want others to have a better life like us. Maybe you could try to remember all of the words off by heart as you all looked proud when you explained about it. Also I liked how you said breaking news that sounded urgent. I also think you could donate some money to "send a cow charity" because they deserve the life that we have. Keep up the Good work

    ReplyDelete

Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well.
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say.
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.