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Friday 28 July 2017

Recount Writing 8D

WALT -  We are learning to write a recount using a hook in the Orientation and elaboration of 1 idea.For the week we were doing recount writhing with hooks and good editing.
CONTROLS CLICKING! is the sound of me playing Minecraft. During the holidays I was SOOOO bored I decided to play Minecraft on the Xbox with Logan, he was at his house and I was  at my house.


Logan messaged me on the xbox and said “Do you want to play Minecraft with me?” I said “Ok” he told me he also was playing with Sam and Josiah.But he wanted to play Minecraft. I messaged back and said that would be really fun.


After we were playing for a while he messaged and asked if we could go onto the microphone I said ok but “I'll see if i'm allowed first”. I messaged back and said i'm allowed so we talked about how we're sooo super excited for school because it was the sunday before we went back to school.


We played on heaps of different worlds on Minecraft but then we made a new one and we spawn and we found a mansion it was super big and amazing in the world it was surivival (survival) and every time we went in the mansion the monsters were there and they keepted making us die and we had to keep spawing in. We both had a little feeling that it was hunted (hauted).Around four weeks ago we wouldn't have found that mansion because it was in the latest update. The latest update come out not that long ago and it had heaps of cool amazing bright new blocks and different colored beds and that in mostly every world that's made has a mansion.

I had so much fun in the Holidays playing with Logan and some of my really super fantastic nice friends ,I love the Holidays and school so much they're both really fun but during the Holidays I messed school learning having fun with all my friends and teachers.

2 comments:

  1. Thanks for putting me in it and i did have fun playing mine craft with you

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  2. Well done Jasmine, I love how you have explained what you got up to in the holidays, There was one sentence that didn't make sense, it was this one "The latest update come out not that long ago" The bit where it says come should have been came, but I really enjoyed your writing! Good Job!!

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