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Thursday, 30 March 2017

Never poem

We were learning to do alliterations poem's. We had to brainstorm a letter with a heaps of words that start with the some letter. I choose the letter M and I made a drawing of one of the words that I used in my sentence the drawing was very easy and quick to make.



4 comments:

  1. Hi Jasmine my name is Sandra I loved the sentence called I would never wear magic make up maybe next time you could add a bit more writing next time like I would never wear magic mucky make up.

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  2. Hi Jasmine my name is Sandra I loved the sentence called I would never wear magic make up maybe next time you could add a bit more writing next time like I would never wear magic mucky make up.

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  3. Hi Jasmine, I really enjoyed reading your poem especially the part where you said I would never go to a maple maths museum. Maybe next time you could add one or two more sentences. I remember writing the never poem as well.

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  4. Hi Jasmine, I'm Zach from St Bernadette's School. Your Never poem is really cool. I think it has had a lot of creativity gone into it. Next time you could put more adjectives in it like munted or muddled.

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