We were writhing down ideas on bits of paper from the pitcher that was on the paper.In our groups we come up with amazing ideas after we finished planning/writhing the ideas down. We got to pick one of the pitchers and describe what we think they were felling,hearing and seeing.
Shiny hot snow desert. Severe weather comes and goes as it pleases. Snow can be very bad.
Mostly all she could hear was the sound of the wind crying, well it took her hair for a short fly. She could hear the sound of the ice crushing while she took steps with her heavy boots stomping. She likes the sound of Snow crunching also Icy Crystals breaking.
The white clouds and snow. A dessert full of snow, shimmers in the sun like golden sand.She could see in the descent that some of the snow was melting like an ice cream on a hot day.Over the bumpy hills she can see more to walk along.She sees the sun slowly dragging the clouds away.
Windy day she feels like her hat just going to blow off her head while her hair is flying around in her eyes.The shiny sun makes the wind feel a bit warmer.Far from her destiny she feels like she's been walking for five hours but its only mean half an hour.Once she gets home she's going tell everyone about her holiday but she wishes to have someone to come with her on this mysterious long hike holiday next time.
If I went on this hike I think I would b alot more fit. I don't even think I could do a walk that long for even 2 minutes.
Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I like this post because it it was really descriptive. Why did you have to do this or did you just post it on your blog? Next time remember to put a space in between the full stop and the capital.
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