In writhing we have been learning about persuasive writhing.
We had to decide if Miss McLeod should get a cat or a dog for a pet.
We are learning about persuasive vocabulary and we had to highlight them in our work.
I think Miss McLeod should get a dog. Please read my persuasive writhing to find out why.
Paw TacticDid you know dogs can be your personal body guard? I think Miss McLeod should get a dog for that reason. I think Miss McLeod should get a dog because they're easy to train, their playful and they are really good friend’s.
Firstly you can train a dog to play fetch, sit and roll over and many other things. Another thing they could do is shake your hand and beg for food. Also you could train your dog to bring your newspaper or slippers to you when you don't feel like doing anything or having a lazy day.Another reason Miss McLeod Should get a dog is they are really playful. They are playful by chasing their toys and tail. They can play many types of games like fetch.Finally Miss McLeod Should get a dog because they are really good friends. They will cuddly up to you when you're feeling down, when you're going to bed and you're all alone. They are at the end of the bed ready for a big warm cuddle. When you curl up on the couch and watch tv with your lovely fluffy dog it will keep you warm.Overall I think Miss McLeod should get a dog because they're good friends, they're playful and you can train them. So go and get your wallet and get to the closest pet store today.
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