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Tuesday, 10 May 2016

my colour

We have been learning to write poems in  literacy  with Mrs Mcguinniety first  Mrs Mcguinniety reed the story then we brain stored our ides next we rite our poems.

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  1. Very cool jasmine try put some more stuff on it

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  2. I think that your poem is amazing and that I think you put a lot of effort into it. (:

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