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Friday, 2 September 2016

Walrus Writing

A few weeks ago we were learning about walruses and we had to watch a video that was a live walrus after that write a description and then we wrote this description.





Attempt 1
The walrus has a giant body and has giant tusks they look like giant sharp bananas that are used for killing animals to eat.Their bodies look like Wrigley brown and pink bears with pink bubbles.The bubbles are there to make them warm when they're underwater. and they have little nostrils that look like eyes. You can hardly see their eyes there head is smaller than their bodies it's a big difference because there bodies are as big as an epithet and there head is as big as a coconut  walruses look really creepy and are really big.     
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